Ch. 4 Forbidden Love - DeiSaku

here's chapter 4, it's long. i still haven't come up with a title for it. i'm open to some ideas for the title & i'll take it into consideration. if it's great so far, i'll post more. sorry, i kinda rushed it a little near the end. i'll fix it tomorrow.

if there is any spelling or grammar errors, let me know so i can correct it. but don't be blunt about it.

Chapter 3
Chapter 4: (u're on it)
Chapter 5

Forbidden Love fanfiction (C): (me)
Naruto Characters (C)